Ben, so many details!! D: Especially in the first panel! Btw, I didn't notice any real decline in detail/quality until the last panel. And even that is cute, so nothing to be ashamed of. I really enjoyed reading your comic and looking for hidden details. :D I like how Cori shows up on the last page to do her job, and of course I like all the other ideas you had.

Well done!
And to Penryn/Luthor: I still like it a lot that you made the stationery company Staedtler into an in-game evil corporation, haha.
I enjoyed reading this story from both of you, good fight guys! :D